Friday, February 19, 2010

First Line Friday!

I have just started revisions, and what better place to start than at the beginning, right? I thought I would share my first line with you guys.

"Night time is never a good time to go out alone."

I would love to see your first lines! Have a great weekend!


  1. I'll play. This is from my Nano wip that I just looked at again yesterday, first time since November. My first line is short and really goes with the second line so here's both.

    My dad still thinks I’m ten. That’s how old I was when my mother died, and how old I was when my father crawled into his ‘cave’, also known as an office on the 26th floor of the John Hancock tower.

  2. Sounds like this could be a tear jerker. Thanks for sharing!

  3. Very interesting and completely true. Love Elle's too! Here's mine from my Epic Fantasy novel:

    Power pressed itself against the Second’s skin, gripping him tightly.

  4. Wow, Nisa, sounds like your first line jumps right in the middle of the story. Cool!

  5. Fun, fun! Revisions are not my favorite, but I am still plowing through. My first line is short and sweet. I added the next sentence, because I like them together. ;)

    The lock would not budge.
    Jocelyn blew a strand of unruly hair from her eyes and paused to still her racing heart.

  6. Just found you! became a follower!